Six Sentence Sunday


Osiyo~

Welcome back! Or welcome to the Ranch if you are a first time visitor! ๐Ÿ™‚ If you don’t know, there are many authors who participate in 6 Sentence Sunday every week. If you click on the logo above you can find and visit all or as many as you wish!

This week I’m sharing a little something from another cowboy story I submitted to Harlequin Special Edition two years ago, and only recently got a rejection on it….

To set it up a little, this is from Healing Whispers Tanner Royal, horse whisperer, has arrived on Tobi Star’s breeding and training ranch to treat a horse for her. This is his first impression of her. ๐Ÿ˜€

Golden eyes of a lioness, sharp with a dark rim of long thick lashes grazed over him slowly, sending a shock of heat through him. He shifted his feet as his temperature hiked. He wished she would look somewhere else.

Hellโ€™s bells.

Heโ€™d stared down Brahman bulls with less fire in their eyes. This slip of a woman was as exotic looking as any creature heโ€™d ever seen on National Geographic, and just as intense.ย 

I adore these two characters and absolutely LOVED writing their story. They will get a revision workout and be submitted out again this year. Or that’s my intentions for them anyway. lol I hope you enjoyed this sneak peek.

Dodadagohvi~

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About Calisa Rhose

I'm a mother of three daughters, five granddaughters (with a new girl on the way), and wife to a wonderfully supportive man. I began writing warm-you-to-the-bones romance as a teen, and the addiction has now morphed into a life of its own. I became a published author in May 2011! I create art and jewelry with polymer clay and beads to relax, and have a passion for sewing for fun. See my art, craft and sewing projects at http://lisasfancifulallure.wordpress.com and on Calisa Rhose's Pinterest: www.pinterest.com/CalisaRhose

Posted on 06/17/2012, in Blogs, Harlequin, inspirations, my writing, Promotion, Six Sentence Sunday, Welcome and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.

  1. I agree. Get it out there Calisa!

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  2. I love first impressions and ‘hells bells’- gotta love that line! Great six. You must resubmit! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Really like this: Heโ€™d stared down Brahman bulls with less fire in their eyes. Seems to say as much about him as her and is such an unusual detail.

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  4. Hells Bells, yeah baby! Resubmit!!!

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  5. She knocked him for a loop with a look. Nice six!

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  6. Oh, I love this. I can feel the heat between them. Fabulous snippet! And I agree, definitely send this baby back out!

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  7. Nice six! Good luck with submission and great visual with National Geographic. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Yes, for sure, for sure, you must resubmit!!! Love your writing. Great six.

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